Not sure if you'll get this message Dan, but you're missing out on some simple marks here. Ideally, you need to show evidence of planning through schedules and storyboards. In terms of construction, it'd be a good idea to complete another draft of your film, this time maybe with a soundtrack to make it more authentic as an opening. Currently an E grade; you should be aiming for at least a C. Mr Taylor.
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Not sure if you'll get this message Dan, but you're missing out on some simple marks here. Ideally, you need to show evidence of planning through schedules and storyboards. In terms of construction, it'd be a good idea to complete another draft of your film, this time maybe with a soundtrack to make it more authentic as an opening. Currently an E grade; you should be aiming for at least a C. Mr Taylor.
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